An Author in Progress

This is where you'll find me trying to mould myself into a respectable writer - it may take sometime...
You'll find anything from a piece of experimental creative writing, some thoughts on my novel developments, to even the occasional literature-based academic paper.

Monday, 6 December 2010

feedback for the short story

I'm in happy phase, after a very stressful day with logistic hell of magazine editorials.
Had great feedback from uni friends about this first fiction piece... just some very useful suggestions about tightening up the relevance of the closing para.

I'm so glad that my narrator is not loveable and that is accepted by the feedback given, so it's all looking positive.

I shall re-examine the ending and beginning to find the coherence needed to make both sections work together.


  1. I'm glad you had a wonderful day. I wanted to thank you for editing my story today. You read between the lines and have an excellent eye for internal struggles and overall plots. Thank you for the wonderful help.

  2. The pleasure was all mine. As writers, we learn from each other.

    I'm just really lucky to be studying on one of the few contemporary writing degrees in the UK , and doing this with a bunch of really diverse people - all with unique styles. It's all good for me.

  3. Best of luck with revisions! Thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving a comment :)